Sunday 6 December 2015

Show not tell dream



Description: This term for writing we had to split up into different groups. We got to choose if we were doing: limericks with Troy, descriptive writing with Rebecca and reports with Elly. I decided to go with the Descriptive writing because I really need to work on that.


Task: our writing task for this term was to make little story about an experiences in Poutama, but I wanted to be more creative in my writing and do a story based of something that has happened at school.
Here It is:

Tuesday 1 December 2015

Quick write (4 days of school in a week)

In week 8 for our quick write task we had to make an excuse to why there should be ether: 4 days of school, or keep it the same, or 6 week of school. I chose to do one that was 4 days of school and here it is.




I DEMAND TO HAVE 4 DAYS OF SCHOOL IN A WEEK!

AND HERE ARE SOME REASIONS WHY.


First things first children are meant to make the most of their childhood they only have 18 years to be a child. And they need time to play and have fun not to sit in school away from their parents for 30 hours a week. 48 hours of relaxing days is not enough. You wonder why people love Fridays It’s cause they believe that’s the day that’s also going to turn into weekend because its named a weekend but the government doesn’t approve of actually turning the weekends into a 72 hour weekends. Dose the government even care that much for children because I don’t think that they realize that the people in childhood spend more time at school then with their parents. The homework takes 4ever to complete that only gives them time to eat their dinner have a shower get into their pajamas and then get ready for bed. So that means they have… NO TIME TO PPLLAAYY!!!!

So those are my reasons why Fridays should be weekends




Book Bash Partnership Task

Partnership task book bash

whats the theme in the story: Pretrial, Friendship, Teamwork, Futuristic, Survival.